Year 5 Space Themed Chocolate Bar

Look at  Olivia’s  sensational space chocolate bar advert.
‘Blast off the chocolate bar with popping candy – will pop you out of this world.’ You have done an amazing job Olivia, as it is very bright and eye-catching – Thank you for sharing it with us.

It’s nearly lunch time as I write this and I would love a piece of the moon bar for my pudding!  I love the way Emma has incorporated a rainbow in to her design.  Amazing work Emma and thanks for sharing the picture with us (I would have liked the chocolate too!)

Wow!  This chocolate bar really does look ‘Out of this world’! It is really clear that Emelia has put a great deal of time and effort to produce this chocolate bar, but her hard work has paid off because it looks totally awesome! I wouldn’t be surprised if Cadburys wanted to make this!  Excellent work Emelia.

Just look at this awesome chocolate bar design by Henry.   This is what he told me: ‘This is my chocolate bar design. I got the idea from Star Wars. I created two characters to use in the  Adverts. They are called Rocket ears and blue boy.’ Amazing work Henry and thank you for sharing this.

Introducing the Cosmic Bar…the chocolate creation of Georgia…It really does look and sound delicious. Great work Georgia and thanks for sharing!

Oh my goodness! I am writing this at lunch-time and I’m starting to feel very hungry.  What an amazing name for a chocolate bar and the persuasive language really make me want to eat it.  Well done Riya!

These are the amazing chocolate bars that we made in school. I’m sure you’ll agree that they are ‘Out of this world!’ Some of the children also did a poster or comic strip to advertise their new chocolate bar.

   

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